Definitely closer, not sure I like the crayon font. What about the script font with the mama in a softer color, somehow I feel like we are missing a color here. As well as acupuncture, massage and education we have all organic baby items, and there are some big ticket items in there, I feel like the font needs to be more adult. I am having a lot of fun with this. I am somehow still liking the affection shown in #17