Thank you for the ranking.
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As for the wording on the logo, I wanted to try reducing to Weapons - Training • Sales. It will be difficult to read if it gets to wordy on the actual logo itself. Once reduced to business card size, it may no longer be legible. It may be better to have the logo stand alone with a few words and then include the different services off to the side.
As always, any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks!
Marcelo