if you think this will print well on a shirt then leave it. or do you think i should have another version for shirts? i am not sure how this works if i can get multiple logos from you? let me know.
i was told to remove the buy sell enjoy. sorry. lol. can you also make the windows a little bigger and seperate the 4 boxes that make up the window spaced further apart so there is no bleeding when i print these on a shirt. can you also lower the top blue section closer to the TexasStateHomes.com and move the red bottom section up also.
not sure if you raised the blue in height. right above the star, can you make it more higher. can you also move the words buy sell enjoy higher also. they are too close to the edge near the B and the Y.
so the last few tweaks are. can you raise the blue a little. not a lot just a little more. leave the star where it is. just want to make it a little high at the top. can you move the buy sell enjoy up and away from the bottom edges. maybe make it a little longer also. i also would like the ends of the flat to align with the ends of the TEXAS STATE HOMES. not the .com but the S in HOMES. i am still not sold on the font so i think when it goes transparent i can show you the font to try. can you try a font where there is no round edges on the lower case t?
i wasn't going to put a tag line but was told by my brother it would help. i don't think it can be added but you seem to be able to make things work really well. what you do think about adding BUY SELL ENJOY as the tag line?
can you make a view version with a font that has more straight and sharper edges. i like the font you have but just curious what it will look like with a more sharper look.
in the first version of this. you had homes in the bottom. would it makes sense to move the .com in place of the homes and move the star in the top blue part? just a thought to help see the .com more. it's coming out great. thank you.
So, I submitted some color / font options – the bird has been removed.
Colors:
Entry #214: PANTONE 185 C
Entry #215: PANTONE 1795 C
Entry #216: PANTONE 186 C
Entry #217: PANTONE 187 C
Entry #218: PANTONE 194 C
About the font:
Agree, a bit thicker font will help on the readability, in addition it's easier to embroider, and screen printing. Here are some different fonts: #219 ; #220 ; #221 ; #222
so far this one is my favorite. can you remove the bird. these will have to be able to be printed on a shirt. Can i see a few other versions with different fonts? i like the Captitol T S and H. makes it easier to read. can you also make some other versions with a slightly darker red. i like it but i just want to make sure we get the right red. so far you have this contest. the logo is awesome. you came out of nowhere with this. thank you.
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It should be a 20-30% tone of the blue, or do you prefer to have a third color, like a gray ink?
The window is a bit bigger now, with larger spaces between the "boxes" .
Also, the lower and upper parts (the map) are closer to the text.
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Before:
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Now:
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"can you raise the blue a little. not a lot just a little more." ✓ (done)
"can you move the buy sell enjoy up and away from the bottom edges." ✓ (done)
"maybe make it a little longer also. " ✓ (done)
"i also would like the ends of the flat to align with the ends of the TEXAS STATE HOMES." ✓ (done)
Which of these is closest to what you like? Although it may be none of them.
#220 , #221 , #222 , #233 , #234
Okay, then we can try new fonts with NO round edges on the "t":
#239 , #240
OR, I can personalize the font you like the best, everything is possible :)
#241
I hope I didn't confuse you by submitting all of these :)
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#234 – Sharper / bold
#235 – Original font with tagline
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Please see my recent entries #230 , #231 and #232
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Colors:
Entry #214: PANTONE 185 C
Entry #215: PANTONE 1795 C
Entry #216: PANTONE 186 C
Entry #217: PANTONE 187 C
Entry #218: PANTONE 194 C
About the font:
Agree, a bit thicker font will help on the readability, in addition it's easier to embroider, and screen printing. Here are some different fonts: #219 ; #220 ; #221 ; #222
Thank you!
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I'm especially curious about your opinion about the font, if you would like to see different options, just let me know.
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Thanks again!
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