I can see you are trying to create an array of marks from which to choose, but it seems that the more of these I see, the more "busy" they all become. Maybe the idea of having a mark just doesn't work ..... I like your creative energy, can you play with just the name & tag line and see if that set of words can be presented more creatively?
I like what you are doing with your last round of entries (the word of between two lines), but now that I see it I'm thinking it doesn't need a mark. The way you've "situated" the six words looks pretty nice. I might be ready to accept that, do you see anything that might enhance it further?
If you google "Tennessee state flag" you'll see the red & blue colors, could you play around to see if you can use those colors (instead of blue and gray)? It might not work, just wanted to see.
thanks for your feedback, but only 1st ranked can submit the revisions, if you give me chance i will submit the revision, i have already work what do you want
Hello, i just want to tell about some problem, my logo #127 is have another designer want me to withdraw because some case in the layout, i will withdraw and give you some hint.
i'am sory about this inconvience, i don't want dissatisfactory you, but i want a be a proffesional designer