#15 Revotype, I like your concept. Different font and a little darker color in Temecula Valley Woman's Club, and Celebrating Community larger. On #14 is this meant to be a reversal or alternative? Maybe a different background color. Not so army green. Try different colors please.
Another thougth. Because we are going to use on shirts, cards etc. How about self containing the color with a more of a rectangular box and gold lines under it.??
Very good Judy let me try it, i don't get it completely about the box and the gold lines, i will submit an example if it's the way you imagine it, thanks Judy.
Lots of great ideas though could you try one more. Something that is more out there. Less elegant, more sporty, very abstract, dynamic. When you look at it says who are these ladies and I really want to be one of them.
Good try, I like it. Different color in background. We like your Burgandy's and your golds. maybe not together though. i am sorry for all the grief. Judy
Rick, #24 Ok, We are down to the wire. We still really like your design. One more request, please. How about a nice Cursive for Temecula Valley Woman's Club. Something to match the grape vine and make it a little more feminine. Thanks for all your work!