Temecula Valley Woman's ClubLogo Design Contest

#29
Loquaz,
I like your concept here, and your other work. This is nice and clean. But a little too clean. Could we loosen up the Font in Temecula Valley Woman's Club, or add more color. We are a dynamic group of educated, spirited women who work hard. We would like to use this on Golf shirts, signage, as well as letterhead and business cards. I guess it needs to stand out a little more. Love the grape motiff

Thanks,

Judy
TVWC Contact

Thank you for your kind and helpfull feedback. Submitting herewith a revision using a script font, which hopefully brings a more dynamic feel to the design. I'm also showing an alternate asymmetrical layout. I look forward to your thoughts. Cheers!

(This comment references Entry #32)

#32
larger font for celebrating community and education
Thanks.

On some of your other work, you were very playful, abstract. Do you have anything like that for us? Related to women.

Thanks,
Judy

Hi Judy: I'm submitting a revision of #32 with the tagline in a larger font. I'm also submitting a more playful version with the grape theme. I'm still thinking on the topic of playful and women -- will be back tomorrow with more. Cheers!

Thanks, logquaz. #32

I like the playfullness of the vine, but your coloring was better on #34, but we can fix that later if we choose that one.
Judy

A couple of font and art revisions.

(This comment references Entry #89)

Love the font on #90.
your still in the running. however, the grape is backward, I like the grape better on #34. can we work it out?

Good morning! I just read your comments, but was able to pop in with a quick revision using the font you liked. I hope it's close to your vision. Cheers!

Yes, it works. you are in top 3. One more thing. Larger font, Celebrating Community and Education.
We are done.
Thanks.

Hello! The font size of the tag line is easily enlarged -- I have made the change and can show it to you here, but you'll need to temporarily put my current submission into 1st place so I can upload it. Cheers!