#29 Loquaz, I like your concept here, and your other work. This is nice and clean. But a little too clean. Could we loosen up the Font in Temecula Valley Woman's Club, or add more color. We are a dynamic group of educated, spirited women who work hard. We would like to use this on Golf shirts, signage, as well as letterhead and business cards. I guess it needs to stand out a little more. Love the grape motiff
Thank you for your kind and helpfull feedback. Submitting herewith a revision using a script font, which hopefully brings a more dynamic feel to the design. I'm also showing an alternate asymmetrical layout. I look forward to your thoughts. Cheers!
Hi Judy: I'm submitting a revision of #32 with the tagline in a larger font. I'm also submitting a more playful version with the grape theme. I'm still thinking on the topic of playful and women -- will be back tomorrow with more. Cheers!
Good morning! I just read your comments, but was able to pop in with a quick revision using the font you liked. I hope it's close to your vision. Cheers!
Hello! The font size of the tag line is easily enlarged -- I have made the change and can show it to you here, but you'll need to temporarily put my current submission into 1st place so I can upload it. Cheers!