You pop out the "green" and i like what I see, well done. Do you think if you made the left symbol of the motive curl back up against the silver part making an "S" would be interesting.
If you take #195 and then let the blue potion turn on itself to create a S but with the S portion the bottom angling up the silver portion. In one of your logos you joined them . In this instance they must not join but maintainthe gap between them. Hope this helps. We are nearly there.
in #203 you joined and in the last one you sent you also joined the two. Let the blue line turn as you have but do not join to the other line but let it angle back up the silver line a bit withe the same gap being maintained between the.
We are no longer lost in translation, all we now need is for the bottom portion to have the same "fold" as the top portion and then I think we are there.