this is my opinion, head slightly hidden in such lines do not have a neck that can give a sense of mystery,
let's try to compare entry #105 that the head they actually show up there and did not suggest anything, it's like a truncated circle, and i was try reduce back person #107 but this is not good i think
How you can reduce the back of the person?, same all but not a lot of back or shoulder, can your balance that part? seem like the person doesn´t have any neck. We love the idea.
Excellent improvement however I would like to know if you can balance a little bit more the element because we think that maybe is too much but we love the idea of the person inside. Do you can refine the element? Back of the person not to big because seem like gym´s logo please. And with white background, no black. Thanks!, waiting for your news!
We love the first sketch and the meaning (impression of infinity) however we think that you can help us to transmit more things. please check the videos uploaded on this contest. Could you please try to work more on this element and idea? Maybe make also more obvious the letter T but without lose your idea. It´s great.
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let's try to compare entry #105 that the head they actually show up there and did not suggest anything, it's like a truncated circle, and i was try reduce back person #107 but this is not good i think
im on my pc now.. let me try to make it variants..
feedback wellcome:-)