Hi Peg,
Thanks for the new design, but I prefer your earlier one (#12) at the moment. I've updated the brief a little, so please can you re-read it and see if the updates help you come up with something new. Please try to avoid going down the same route as everyone else. I'd prefer to see your own personal interpretation of the brief, so do feel free to let your imagination go wild and get creative both in terms of style and also of content.
I look forward to seeing your next designs.
All the best,
Rob