Thanks for your submission as well--I also like what you've done, but please take a look at my early general comments to Xyan's submissions, namely around colors (black and bright gold (closer to yellow)), and my preference for the making "Professional Preparatory" the most prominent words in the logo ...
Thanks again and look forward to seeing your changes.
Thanks so much for your entries--I truly appreciate the effort you are putting into my contest.
I really do like entry #16--it is sharp and strong--but I have a few critiques: a) "Professional Preparatory" should be still more prominent; b) while I like how 'clean' the image is, it is missing a logo 'image' or design (things I really like about what the other top designers have submitted) ... I should point out that I have to please several stakeholders with this logo--kids (our future students), parents, and funders (both corporate and nonprofit folks) ... I know it is hard to please everyone, but I think your logo would have a much stronger appeal with some kind of image included, yet without making it to cluttered (which is my issues with entries #21, #26 and #27).
Thanks again for your work and I look forward to your revisions ...
Thanks so much for your hard work and entries into my contest! I really like your work and am likely going to consider one of your designs in the judging phase.
I was hoping that you could serve up a version of #50 that includes the letters "TFOA" ... I was thinking perhaps if you place them in small gold letters below the laurels and cap and place a small white star in between each letter ...
Thanks again and look forward to seeing what you come up with!