Taverna BluLogo Design Contest

this is a very nice look, but can you clean up the type to make it more readable? take the blue color and some how make represent water a little better... the bottom fonts are a little too small to read, and again too casual, can you make it more readable?

Thanks for the feedback, here is the revised design, please let me know what you think.

(This comment references Entry #41)

Great Enhancement to this -- well done, can the wave in the blue come back... what you hav lloks good too, But, i'd like to see the blue represent water more.

You might not need as much blue either? Maybe an underline of the word Taverna?

Thanks for the ranking & feedback, I will be away from my design computer today until
approx. 5pm (CDT) but I will submit resivions as soon as I get back.
Thanks again.

Here are a couple revisions with your latest feedback in mind, let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Don

(This comment references Entry #56)

I like the revisions -- I wonder if the water element:
1. Goes away entirely,
2. the Blue swath gets wider between the words

Thanks, I will submit some more ideas when I get back to my design computer
later on tonight.