I designed my logo with the idea of having it look great on shirts, gym bags, etc. Something that your gym goers would love to get their hands on! So I came up with #68, and then I also dropped in a distressed/grunge layer to give shirts and other things a really cool vintage look: #67.
I look forward to hearing what you think! Also, I will be happy to provide revisions as needed, so that we can get this exactly how you want it.
Hey, That sounds great! I will get some revisions done ASAP for you. I could change the slogan to "FUN FOR ALL", as that would cover anything they do at your gym.
Here are some revised options, with a new slogan: GYM FUN FOR ALL. That is nice and balanced on both the top and the bottom, while accurately conveying what you do!