#38 You may want to consider something that is not confusing visually and easily seen in very visually busy and sign overloaded stores. Anything to thin...too many colors and subdued colors may be lost..Stay with your bold color and and bold fonts and your signage will stand out and be recognized.
I like the unique design in #29, but we want to stay away from horizontal logos and try to stay close to a square shape. Can you convert #29 into a stacked version by chance?
We really like your #81 but want to make some tweaks to see if it will work. - we like the number "5" hand sketched, but want to see if you can make it thicker and shorten the end (tail) before it starts to fade out. - We would like to see "massage" in all capitals
once you make those 3 changes, can you show it in color as you have it and also in reverse (white) on maroon background?
Thanks for your help! I like how the 5 in #96 is bolder, but we lost the "sketch" effect from #81 that we liked. Is there any way to just add more sketch lines to make it thicker and not fill in the lines?
After seeing the background in red in #94, we need to make that red darker. it needs to be more maroon.
Can you put "massage" in the font you use in #38? That one is easier to read.
I hope I didn't go too far in the other direction...as simple as it seems it takes a little time and because I had already expanded the lines...let me know. I will try my best to get the lines the way you want them.
And if the maroon needs to be darker I can do that too.
We are getting feedback that "Take 5" is not so easy to identify. So in #104 can you make "Take" a simpler font (but not all caps) and turn it into maroon too so the eye reads it and the 5 together? Does that make sense?
#119 #118 Here are a couple of font possibilities...if you want to see others or if these are too simple let me know and I'll try some more...but will upload those to you tomorrow morning.