I like the concepts and style of this. I like the box itself and that you incorporated "results-oriented". Would prefer to see different graphic(s) in the box (a different running figure and/or with finisher medal comes to mind). Would also love to see more "exciting" treatment of the name: different font and color other than black. Thank you!
Thank you for your further submissions. I really like the treatment of the name in #10. I like the contrast between Tailored and Running. Wondering if we could tweak the box some more? I like the box itself - the outline of it and the gradual color inside. Could we try a version that would look like this:
1) Use the style of #10 but use the internal box graphic of #9 and change the swirl to silver (but I am not ruling out the red at this point) 2) Remove the fold-down to see what that would look like 3) Also would like to remove the check mark. I get why it is there and appreciate what you are going for, but I am afraid it would not be as clear to others.
Thank you, I really like the updates! Particularly #16. I like the sleek running figure, the slanting of the box, the color looks good, the swirl looks good. I like it!