SynergyLogo Design Contest

If were doing this change your our guy - please hit me with a lot of options. Happy to pay a bonus.

The "synergy" color and the ribbon color feel to off and not comphrehisive.

More burst at the bottom of the beam

"laser focused" is stil too spread between the words and to tight up on the line spacing from "Synergy"

I need to see more black and grey samples as the alternative to the color version - you have the design but it we haven't seen the new version in white on black and black on white- also we will print this logo on all contracts and on clothing so it important it looks good not just in color but in monochrome.

I need more variations of the ribbon - between original design and updated S.

Please upload

Need to see this also shifted to more black and whites with subtle pops off our blue/blues.

Updated

Hello.
I have made the changes and will upload them as soon as you update the rankings as only the first placed designer can upload new designs as of now.
Thanks and kind regards..

Ok - can you show my a few variations of the ribbon - comments we did receive were that is looks like a dollar sign. Maybe try ribbon like #141

Need to see the subtext in black.

Need to see the bottom of the beam or pulse in different colors - different blues, greens, mauve, beige.

hello .
I hope youre well.
I am working on the new designs and will upload them shortly.
Kind regards

“S” gradient on your #625 and #650 was good use of blue and green.

Very fun - but too snakey.

Don’t like the breaks in the circle - maybe too medical practice feeling - we are a dealer. Wouldn’t mind seeing some more wild card options like this.

Still a large gap between sub text “LASER” and “FOCUSED” keep it inline under “SYNERGY” but close gap between the two words a little bit.

Hope this helps and we are close to finished- feel free to let me know your questions.

Try the beam also round at the top like #142 vs. square. This may cause you to have to round the burst and be less triangular in the burst beams.

Sticking to this more bubble “S” ribbon on the icon like your #142 vs your #581

Very excited about this coming together- lets gooo!

I think the font resonates to our original font well and is strong - but I am interested in seeing different fonts- both corporate and bubbly- lower case and all caps- want to see the icon move around - top, top left, top right , behind, and even be able to replace the “S” of synergy in some cases.

I think we need to shorten the top of the beam so its not as long in length for the icon.

Try keeping the ribbon in sharp radiant and the beam solid but gradient at the bottom at the burst.

Try the Icon in a circle and above font.

Do only gradient on the icon, not on the text.

Make the beam complimentary to the ribbon in the icon.

Stick to Light blue, dark blue, and green color schematic.

Nice touch to make the beam an isolated color- with faint touches on the ribbon.

Hello sir.
Thank you for the feedback..
I am working on all the requested changes and will be uploading the new concepts as I finalise on them shortly.
Thanks and kind regards..

Waiting on you

You could try more curvature on the "S" or ribbon of the icon was well-matched with a 3d look and good dynamic/3D color.

Never cold lock the wings on this one- keep trying.

Love the bold colored circle- but need a different more on-brand symbol or squiggly inside.

Interested in seeing this more corporate/bubbly design with brighter staff colors and as a laser beam vs. staff.

Red is out btw- if you need to go that bright use pink/purple/nude hues.

Cool- color is great - but feels like a fingerprint.

To snakey. But cool direction more here too.

This is fun - keep playing for a wild card.

Try the "S" or ribbon wrapping around the behind of the laser beam instead of the front as well.

It is also a long logo- we will be using it for signage, holographic stickers, and clothing IE hats, scrubs, and random placement on shirts,

Also show as all black on white- all white on black and in color on black.

Let's close this out -

For Color: I need to see dynamic sharp blue/ light blue and muted blue gradients. We need to see variations of complementary but popping colors on the beam and subtext. Green, Purple, Orange, etc...

Try one with the "S" matching the subtext in color and the beam matching "SYNERGY".

Please also try one with Blue, Green, Black.

For Icon; Please offer a few versions of the "S" or a ribbon icon similar to what you have created. We want a dynamic look and we are not afraid of corporate-bubbly or structured looks,

We also want to see a more 3D ribbon look for comparison.

For the font; Keep the subtext "LASER FOCUSED" juxtaposed in-line underneath "SYNERGY" as you have it but reduce the gap between the two words in the center.

cool concept can you play with squiggly a bit more?

Cool- I don't know if green is the best color for the beam- can you do some other color variation? Maybe purple at the base where the laser effect is?

Can you change red to green with a gradient?

Hello.
I've made the new concepts and they are #580 and #581
Thanks and kind regards.

Cool- can you add a beam or phaser to bottom of staff/laser through the Icon? Please use font from 569

Hello.
Thanks for the feedback . Ill work on the new concepts and upload them as soon as possible.
Thanks and kind regards

Show me more - I want to see other fonts and the sub text. I would also love for you to take another attempt at the wings very faint and transparent. The wings you tried on the last weren’t’ fitting.

Hello and good morning.
Thank you for the feedback and comments.
I will work on the above suggestions and upload the new concepts as soon as possible.
Thanks again and kind regards.

Can you try this design a few more ways;

-The wings you tried weren't right - we barely want to see the wings and they should be wider.

Can you try another as this is but more 3d to the icon

Also can you make another one but make it less bold?

Lastly, we need to see the icon against some different fonts.

BTW your profile pic is cool dude.

the older font was better.

Wings are too high - fade them out more and try a broader wing spread

Hello.
I hope you're well.
Thank you for the feedback.
I'll make the changes and upload the new concepts shortly.
Thanks again and kind regards.

Nice job, Can you show other color variations and other font variations? I wouldn’t mind seeing what this icon may look like with the wings also updated, detached and subletting showing with a fade.