hi kuur,
thank you for your revised submission. now that i am able to see the logo with the text all in lowercase, i can say that your submission is one of two that i am considering. what i'd like to see to push me closer to choosing your submission is the logo with a few different types of text and some subtle alterations to the logo itself. for the logo, the one critique i have is that it was initially difficult to identify the leaves as leaves. you've come up with a really clever way of communicating the concepts i wanted communicated, so i'd love to see some subtle evolution of the design. thanks!