Hello and thanks for submitting your entries. I do like that you're thinking of combining the symphonic and rock elements, but I'd say keep trying on this. Entry # 1 seems a little too plain, the fonts are too basic and look "typed in" rather than having a real style. I do like the guitar headstock within the O, and the violin within the S. Take a look at the ones I've ranked highest and see if you can shape it towards that. Thanks!