A couple of suggestions might be interesting. 1) Slant or italisize the lettering slightly to look like either the figure is pulling or the letters are pushing 2) I would like to see alternate color combinations on a white background. Basically looking for something that also works well on white paper.
I like #'s 63 and 69. What I like about the design is overall flow and the athlete. I'm looking at being able to use the design with and without the athlete. There are parts of the design that I think we could do without and I would like to add a one star. I don't know how "ethical" my request is but since you already have a star in your design, I would like to add a star. I would like a black star in the center portion of the "O" in SPORTS (#63 and a white star in the "O" #69.
#63 & 69 Delete the ribbon on the left but leave some "Lines" to the left of "Selections so sweet" #69 I think the word "Selections" is getting lost in/through the yellow color. Probably make it a grade of orange/red to darken it up.
Hi, I cannot made your request on #63 and #69, putting a star on letter "O", this was already submitted by other designer but I just send message to the designer and ask permission if he/she agree to use his/her concept, once he agree I will submit it immediately. I upload my own variations a star behind letter S.
On the second part of the request... language barrier. I'm interested in keeping the athlete and deleting the ribbon on the left side... but keeping the lines (short) just to the left of the tag line.
hi, any amount is appreciated, follow your heart's will, if we follow LT guidelines 50 to 60% of contest prize. For me, it is ok how much you can, if it is ok, I will ask your email to send the files directly.