could you try using all lower case letters and also change the font to something that is less bulky? I like the look of Scandinavian fonts and looks - more whimsical and loose.
Instead of the c/d, could you try something with s/d in the middle?
Thank you for writing. we really like the basic design - it's one of our favorites. Here are two ideas - try using all lower case letters in the name. Secondly, we don't like the background color - this logo will be on brown kraft paper packaging so it needs to have more color. Maybe you could reverse the colors and have the background be a strong blue and the font be the gold. Or, try and white and green combination, or gold and white. I hope this is helpful!
I really like this design! The only thing I would wonder about us whether it would jump out at people- if this is a product on a shelf. If there anything you could do with color that would help in that regard?
Hi, thanks for submitting more... This one looks too refined for what I'm after. I'm looking for a looser look, plus if a design has more elements (like lines, curves, little hand-drawn illustrations), I can use these in other parks of my packaging and social media. I have a few things on my Pintrest page which you can accesss
I really like the wheat graphic and the circlular piece. Not crazy about the "d" in the middle.
What about using a font that looks more European or Scandinavian?
And would it look crazy to have a brighter yellow?
Thank you for the feedback. There is in the middle is "c" & "d" both. Just was thinking somehow put the name 1st letters. Thats why that small vertical line.
I like the shape of this design, it gives me some ways to use the elements in other ways on packaging, etc. not sure I like the "D" in the middle but can't give you an other suggestion of what should go there...
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And would it look crazy to have a brighter yellow?
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