Hi! I like the fun, bright and colourful logo idea. If we were just a party business I would love the whole thing! But we are also catering for weddings so an element of sophistication needs to be kept. I like the soft pink candy striped background. I'm just not sure about the colour banner and the font. Could you try something different? Could you perhaps take some jelly beans and lollipops away and make a little less busy? Perhaps just include the balloons and replace the other images with a lovely candy jar and boutique children's sized party chair? I'm not sure how you can work those images in to look balanced. Perhaps a straight banner instead of curved? Thank you. :)
Thanks for the feedback! I revised my designs accordingly. Please let me know what you'd like revised on this batch of designs. I'm always happy to accommodate. Thanks!