I think I have the key for the perfect one :) hehehe... I'll try to explain myself as good as possible, I hope that you can understand me.
Let's take #103 and #107 as reference.
From #103 we would use two elements: the text color and the shadows seen where the strips meet.
From #107 the bright lime green color but with the following arrangement of tones. Please follow me... starting at the top-right triangle, then going down from top-right to middle-left, then from middle-left to middle-right and finally from middle-right to bottom-left
1 and 2 stay the same as they are, then 3, instead of being a darker green, has the same color of 1 and 2. Then in position 4 comes a gray one, that one should be darker gray, the next two, light gray, then the rest stay as they are.
So it is: (1) light green, (2) light green, (3) light green, (4) dark gray, (5) light gray, (6) light gray, (7) dark green, (8) light green, (9) light green and (10) light green.
So, in that order: (1) light green, (2) light green, (3) light green, (4) dark gray, (5) light gray, (6) light gray, (7) dark green, (8) light green, (9) light green and (10) light green
And maybe also: (1) light green, (2) light green, (3) light green, (4) dark GREEN, (5) light gray, (6) light gray, (7) dark GRAY, (8) light green, (9) light green and (10) light green
We really like yours, but because Sway must feel smooth, the sharp edges aren't fitting in well. Can you use your creativity for making it look a little smoother?
Thanks for the update, but you withdrew the other one, it still had a chance to be chosen by our team. It was not that we didn't like it at all, we just wanted to see more proposals from your end.