i so appreciate your rapid response.
It's close.
Can you try these 2 things:
1. Make the "&" bold
2. replace the "&" with a single dot (like a bullet, make purple?)
Hi! Yes. getting closer. For me, the "&" gets lost between the words Writer & Long. I'm trying to make more of a statement and relationships between writer and long distance cyclist.
Can you try a different font for the "&"? Perhaps the font of "Susan" something very flowy and with movement, so the two thoughts are separate , but connected with the "&"
I really appreciate your skill, patience and focus on this detail!
This is my favorite. I like how "Rosenthal" is tucked under the 'Susan". The priorities in the graphic are aligned with my objective: 1. Susan, 2. Rosenthal 3. The Tagline.
This is going in the right direction. Is there a way to graphically differentiate between "ROSENTHAL" (like the clean font) and the tag line. Visually they look too close together.
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please check my latest entry on #236
best regards. :)
I'm stepping away so please get some sleep. Where are you located ? I'm in CA.
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how about this one, is it enough?
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I expected the "dot' to be larger. If you think it still looks OK.
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Do you think visually it can be slightly larger?
I appreciate you!
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Can you replace the "-&-" with a single small purple solid circle.
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please check.
thanks.
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(my keyboard doesn't do a bullet/dot) and I can't pasted a pic into this dialogue box.
So the 'dot' is a spacer.
So the bullet replaces the "&"
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It's close.
Can you try these 2 things:
1. Make the "&" bold
2. replace the "&" with a single dot (like a bullet, make purple?)
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thanks.
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Can you try a different font for the "&"? Perhaps the font of "Susan" something very flowy and with movement, so the two thoughts are separate , but connected with the "&"
I really appreciate your skill, patience and focus on this detail!
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please check and give me feedback.
thanks. :)
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I want to show (or emphasize) the relationship and possibly even movement between Writer and Long Distance Cyclist.
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best regards.
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thanks. :)
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please check.
thanks.
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