I've reshaped the SD icon so that it is more uniform in negative space, specifically the inside D right side the previous submission it looks off. Added a separator the distinguish the to letters.
I have to be honest - having a very hard time deciding between yours and the 2nd rank - my brother-in-law is wanting to go with the 2nd rank logo, and he's hard to deal with. I personally want yours, but he is adamant on getting the 2nd rank.... I don't know what to do...
I think you're right, lets take this logo #116 and replace Premium eJuice with the other slogan and put a circle around this logomark? My brother-in-law likes the circle for some reason - I think it's not necessary and overclutters the logo?
Having a hard time deciding if the cramped lettering looks better than the spaced out version you just made... Maybe try a circle around this logomark too so we can see if it looks better than the spaced out lettering?
Let's put the lower line up closer to the text like you have on the ranked 1 logo, reduce the size of the "SD" logomark and put the circle around it like #108?
Hey Scott! I think the line below looks great - reminds me of cigarettes somehow. The "Supreme Drips" text looks a little cramped to us though - maybe try to put a little more space in between the letters? Maybe also try another version using proper upper/lower case (i.e., Supreme Drips).
Maybe make the "S" in the word SUPREME a little bigger than the rest of the letters, and do the same with the "D" in DRIPS? I guess the better way to explain that is to make the other letters smaller than the S and D?
In my opinion a crown in this letter mark is not required if I added I twill look like an add-on. The text layout is plain which is why I've uploaded several layout options
I'll see what I can come up with regarding your suggestions
In your honest opinion, of the ones you submitted that are similar to this logo - which one do you think is your best work? You see a lot of logo designs and have a better taste in design than I do - just trying to get your opinion as I trust it!
VERY impressed with this logo Scott! If you have any other ideas with the logo text and styling, I would be very open to seeing it! Do you think there is any way to somehow incorporate a crown or hint as some kind of royalty at all?
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Thank you for considering my work
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The icon is distinctive mark. The new font has a better aspect ratio, looks good and reads well.
The other designs with circles and laurels is a tad too busy in my opinion.
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I am think a codensed font as well it seem visually wide
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I'll see what I can come up with regarding your suggestions
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A clever custom letter mark that is clearly distinctive.. There are 3 possible design options. these 3 are my absolute fave.