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Thanks for your feedback, and sorry for the delay respond cause I'm on vacation. and thank you for loving my design, if you are interested in seeing my revised design you should change the ranking because only the top 5 designers can submit revised designs at this stage.
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I really like this concept and it’s evolving in the right direction. I feel the weight/thickness of the font is an improvement. I still feel like the whole concept needs to get amped up a bit. Maybe darker colors. Maybe simplifying the hat even further. Maybe a background where the logo is in a contrasting or negative opposite color. I am not sure but I still think this needs to be a bit more eye catching, powerful and impactful. Thanks.
Right direction. Please see my latest comments and link I just sent relating to your prior logo submission currently ranked second. I would suggest that you work from this version to do any updates because this version is the best so far. Thanks. You’re awesome.
Consider this from the Contest attachment section. Not that we think this one is perfect but just as a visual to illustrate the following:
1. The width of the font and lines.
2. The way the elements stand out (in the example they use more of a 3d or shadow type effect but you might be able to make your current design more bold by using a darker outline color and increasing the weight or width).
3. The way the hat symbol is less literal (note we chose not to use this one because it looks too much like a cloud) but the point is how it’s just the essence of the hat outlines that we’re going for.
To summarize I would suggest going even more bold. Maybe add weight and even consider widening it a bit. I want to keep the modern simple feel and feel like the the simpler the better. I like the current balance but experiment with increasing the Super text. I am sure you have ideas about how to maximize the effect with this logo so don’t necessarily think my suggestions are better than your ideas. This is on the right track just try to make the whole thing feel more substantial and powerful. It’s a SUPER CHEFS logo!
I really like how this one is evolving. I still feel like the white outline around the font is reducing its presence. Maybe try making the outline darker or try some kind of background or try making it even more bold or something. Also I would suggest experimenting with small tweaks to the hat. It’s really good but I think it could get even more simple or artistic without losing it's current greatness. You are on the right track. Thanks.
1. How the chefs hat contains the text making it feel like one cohesive thing.
2. How the chefs hat is not very detailed making it feel a bit more unique and original.
What I would like to see evolve or variations of:
1. Something more bold and memorable. It currently seems a bit soft.
2. Something more modern. I like how the text and the shapes flow together but would like to see a more modern variation that doesn’t lose the connection between the font and hat shape. Meaning I still want the hat and text to fit together in context but maybe evolved in a more modern look. The current font is a bit too script like and would like to see it evolve along with the hat in a more modern way.
Hi: I really like this logo and it is one of my favorites so far. What I like about it is how it’s easy to identify that it’s a chefs hat but simplified to make it more artistic. I also like how the hat kind of contains the text making it feel more cohesive and feels like one thing rather a separate symbol and separate text. So, I wouldn’t want to suggest you change it much but what I would like to see is if you have any ideas on how you might evolve it in a way that somehow makes it more standout and memorable. We would use this logo for online digital uses primarily so how it looks for digital uses is most important. I really like your work and hope you can provide some more ideas with this type of theme and any other themes you might think of. Thanks
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Thanks for your feedback, and sorry for the delay respond cause I'm on vacation. and thank you for loving my design, if you are interested in seeing my revised design you should change the ranking because only the top 5 designers can submit revised designs at this stage.
Thanks.
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1. The width of the font and lines.
2. The way the elements stand out (in the example they use more of a 3d or shadow type effect but you might be able to make your current design more bold by using a darker outline color and increasing the weight or width).
3. The way the hat symbol is less literal (note we chose not to use this one because it looks too much like a cloud) but the point is how it’s just the essence of the hat outlines that we’re going for.
See link https://logotournament.com/attachment/46365.png
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thank you for your appreciation,
you can check my update in #51
Have a great day :)
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1. How the chefs hat contains the text making it feel like one cohesive thing.
2. How the chefs hat is not very detailed making it feel a bit more unique and original.
What I would like to see evolve or variations of:
1. Something more bold and memorable. It currently seems a bit soft.
2. Something more modern. I like how the text and the shapes flow together but would like to see a more modern variation that doesn’t lose the connection between the font and hat shape. Meaning I still want the hat and text to fit together in context but maybe evolved in a more modern look. The current font is a bit too script like and would like to see it evolve along with the hat in a more modern way.
Thanks
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