Actually, I really like the way you incorporated the sun, path and human figure. I have to say I probably like the human representation in your second design a bit more than the first, which is probably due to the legs. However, I like the "rays of light" in your first design. Any way to combine them a bit?
I believe that defining the legs may lose the path a bit, but define the human figure better....its a catch either way. I think the path may tell your story better, and be more memorable because of that fact.
However, I have updated the one with the legs here....