Even though you never asked for it, I do believe you deserve an upgraded prize. I can settle for 2 files... #328 (winner) & #345... to make this easy. I don’t want to select the winner YET, as there may be no option to upgrade the prize, afterwards... thank you, again.
Ok... I will speak to support... if I can have the first 4 files, I would be happy with that, or I could take some time to pick if that is against the rules. Thank you so much!!
Ok... that would be good. Can I raise the prize money without going backwards to the finalist phase? If not I will go backwards and then just end the contest right away by selecting a winner...
THANK YOU! You have done a great job, and I appreciate your help. I am going to make the prize money larger as well. It is deserved. I didn’t know I would get such a good logo or I would have started higher...
Before I pick one of the two, I want to try one other thing...
Please take the yellow sun graphic (not the letters) from #185 and using the most recent font from #328. Then, please write out Sun Meadow Signs only in a straight line. Keep the tag line from #185 also...
Please take your time... we are near the end and you can prioritize your other contest if you feel you need to. Thanks for ALL your work this far. It is appreciated...
I think that I’m like everything but the tag line... So keep everything else the same, but change the tag line color (not the font style). Please, can I see:
1. This tag line just in yellow
2. This tag line in Blue
3. The green tag line with a yellow stroke or border...
4. A blue tag line with a yellow stroke or border...
5. A yellow tag line with a green stroke or border...
6. The old tag line that was in green script with the yellow underline beneath the word shine
No problem... Your design will win for my contest, so I'll let you work on the other contest, and we'll come back to mine later. Just a few small things to try here and there before we finish... we're close!
I really like this... Please add the tag line in yellow, under "graphics", in the same font as the "Sun Meadow" part... in smaller print than the "Signs & Graphics" section...
Hi Quroin, I am with other business owners and I have received some critiques on the logos that I like. In fact, they all have chosen my 4th choice over my own preference. I am hoping to address the issues that they have with the logo.
1. They find the font for the main wording to be too bland, or too plain.
2. They say that there are too many colors; that it should be more simple. They suggest that all the parts of the sun should be that same yellow color. Not red or orange.
3. They don't like the script on the tag line and suggest that I also remove the "!" (exclamation point)... And not to use too shades of green; to choose the darker only.
4. Have warned against using the logo with the initials "SM", as that could have a negative meaning if associated with S & M...
I want to take this seriously and see if we can address these concerns. The big one is the font type. They suggest something more stylish and not just bold... thank you...
I am really impressed with your logos. You have done great creative work and I am planning to choose one of yours. You have made it a hard decision, because I like them all. I am away on business since Monday, so I have not had a lot of time to really choose and review. I am back to my home early next week and will try to keep up with your changes and make a final decision as soon as possible...
Not too much thinner on the rays... It is close to perfect as it is, so it probably only needs one try at it... I only want to see it just a LITTLE thinner, just to be sure it is the right one...
This might be the one... I would love to see the rays just a little thinner, just to see if I like it better that way. Otherwise, the only other thing I would look at are variations in the Green wavy design. I'd like to see other options, whether it's something blocky or something different that is also organic/wavy...
The rays don't feel connected to each other or to the sun. It's only a very slight thing, but maybe a LITTLE closer to the sun and a LITTLE closer to each other? Add one ray?
Add another ray and put the rest of the rays closer together, maybe? They are a little too far apart and maybe they don't feel like they are a part of the sun, or that they are connected. Not sure, but it is just a LITTLE off. Maybe they have to be adjusted so that they are evenly distance form each other? Otherwise, I really like this one and I still like your others, as well...
Can I see this design, with sun rays that look like that pattern above, with one side of the ray being longer than the other? So far, I like your designs the best... Thank you!
A great Design. As with another one I have liked, I would explore different "sun Rays" and different "Grass" designs. Simple or abstract is best. What I like about this is the large "SM" font under the sun. I would use a different font though, because it could look like "SiVI" to some... I would want it to look clearly like an S and an M, without any chance of misreading
This is great! I almost hate to critique at all. I would explore different fonts on the blue lettering, and maybe consider other sun rays and other "grassy" designs, that are similarly simple to the one presented (don't look like actual grass)... I LOVE the interior of the sun and the way that the tag line was presented; that part alone (tag line), can be as whimsical as I see it there...
I like the grass on your other designs best. You hit the mark where you chose something more abstract and more simple for the grass. Wonderful otherwise, as I will comment on, in the other examples..
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Even though you never asked for it, I do believe you deserve an upgraded prize. I can settle for 2 files... #328 (winner) & #345... to make this easy. I don’t want to select the winner YET, as there may be no option to upgrade the prize, afterwards... thank you, again.
for example you want files rank 1 and 2.
if you need a file of rank other than one too.
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Don’t change anything else; it’s perfect otherwise.
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Also change the font for the tag line to the one we used for “Signs & Graphics” lettering in #327 & #328...
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Before I pick one of the two, I want to try one other thing...
Please take the yellow sun graphic (not the letters) from #185 and using the most recent font from #328. Then, please write out Sun Meadow Signs only in a straight line. Keep the tag line from #185 also...
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I've made the tagline thicker
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For this logo, please make the tag line thicker, or in bold type fonts. It seems to get lost a bit. Too thin... (I know that I asked for small type)
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Please wait a moment for me to revise
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Now I have full time to do revisions.
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1. This tag line just in yellow
2. This tag line in Blue
3. The green tag line with a yellow stroke or border...
4. A blue tag line with a yellow stroke or border...
5. A yellow tag line with a green stroke or border...
6. The old tag line that was in green script with the yellow underline beneath the word shine
THANK YOU!
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Now I have arrived home.
I have made a revision #312.
Thank you
Quroin
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I'm out of town within a day so it's impossible to revise. When I get home in the evening I will do it (+7GMT). sorry to have to make you wait.
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Sorry I'm in a hurry because I'm working on another contest too,
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Just want to try a few more wavy line types above the "Meadow" letters...
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I've submitted several revisions
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I've made some changes including submitting some font choices.
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1. They find the font for the main wording to be too bland, or too plain.
2. They say that there are too many colors; that it should be more simple. They suggest that all the parts of the sun should be that same yellow color. Not red or orange.
3. They don't like the script on the tag line and suggest that I also remove the "!" (exclamation point)... And not to use too shades of green; to choose the darker only.
4. Have warned against using the logo with the initials "SM", as that could have a negative meaning if associated with S & M...
I want to take this seriously and see if we can address these concerns. The big one is the font type. They suggest something more stylish and not just bold... thank you...
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OK, I'll wait for it. If you have time between your business feel free to leave feedback if revisions are needed.
Thank you
Quroin
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I've made some revisions and made the sun part thinner.
#137 #142
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I have sent several revisions including at rank 2.
Thank you
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