Very cool design! The only issue is that our clients are always worried about their roof and the crooked lines on your design may make them feel uncomfortable. We're not saying anything is wrong with your design because we like it. So, can you try something different? because we like you creativity :-). Also, we are staying away from red and we like most the colors blue and orange/yellow. We like to see a 3D quality with the colors fading in and out. Great job so far!