#16 - In addition to the letter-case comment I posted to all designers, I'd like to see the shadows in this design continued in this or other designs, but maybe diminished in opacity somewhat. At the solid black level, the shadows somewhat muddle the composition. Also, I'm not sold on the leaf/tree hybrid, though the repetition makes this concept interesting visually. Lastly, the comment about the kerning of the word "nurseries" was mostly due to the alignment, which appears to be off-centered to the left of the words above it. Was this intentional?
#14 - We like this one, but the trees within the leaf would themselves need leaves, as the tree appears to be dead, or a dud, which is bad for our business. Not sure if adding leaves there is possible, but if so, we'd like to see it. If not, you do have some other entries that are interesting to us that we'd be happy for you to continue with.