Hi, Thank you for your submission. I really like the Eagle on your design #46 (I ranked it) but would like to see if you can make some changes: 1. Can you please change the font? I don't really like the first S which looks like a dolar sign (it might be too forward) 2. Can you change the shape of the triangle to look more like a pyramid? (3D illusion) 3. Can you play around with the logo pieces (similar to your #53) but instead of looking like the Eagle is taking off with the top piece of the pyramid, make it look like it is actually placing in on top of the pyramid (the missing piece getting placed where it belongs) Also, I don't want all those different colors in the pyramid (no green, blue, light blue, orange- either one color, or maybe black or silver, and maybe the top blue? ... play around with it) Again, I really like your eagle on design #46 vs. #53!
Lastly, do you think you could reduce the size of the font on the writing in order to make the Eagle and the Pyramid the more important points of the logo (see Medi design #31)... I like the compact look of the writing and then the eagle on top.
I have you as one of my finalists- thanks for your design. Here is my feedback and requested changes:
I like the eagle on design #60 but and the overall layout of everything on #60 (more vertical: eagle, pyramid, and then name of the business. Could you please make a few changes?
1. Use the Eagle on #60 2. The piece of the pyramid that the eagle is carrying, have it make contact with the pyramid (as if it is coming from the left to the right.. so the left side of the piece the eagle is carrying is tilted touching the pyramid but still as if it was about to be fully put into place (opposite as how the top piece looks on design #60 where it is touching the right side of the pyramid) 3. Can you make the pyramid look more equilateral? (the left side of the triangle looks much longer than the right) 4. Below the Eagle & Pyramid, put the SUCCESS WEALTH MANAGEMENT (as you did on #60) 5. Can you narrow the writing to all be aligned (see designs by Medi, ysonmez, & dpack79) where when you see the first letter of "SUCCESS" is aligned with the first letter of "WEALTH" and the last letter of "SUCCESS" is aligned with the last letter of "MANAGEMENT"
Once the above is done, can you play around with the color scheme? Perhaps a couple of options as follow: 1. Blue background (see GoodGuy Design)...Eagle the same color (black with a white face & yellow beak) .... pyramid black... and the writing of "SUCCESS WEALTH MANAGEMENT" all on silver/grey 2. black background (see GoodGuy Design)...Eagle on silver with a white face & yellow beak .... pyramid silver... and the writing of "SUCCESS WEALTH MANAGEMENT" all on blue
I love your design #78. Could you make some changes?
1. The eagle is amazing but somehow it looks like a mean/aggressive eagle (I am asking clients to give me their thoughts and they felt it looked aggresive). Perhaps do something with the eyes and maybe try separating it a bit from the beak and make them round eyes (yellow round eyes) 2. Pryamid: a) Can you make the base of the pyramid be parallel to the writing? (the base is slightly tilted and it is not horizontal) b) Can you make the top of the pyramid look as if it being placed on the top of the pyramid (right now it looks like the eagle is ripping it off the pyramid... also, the talons look very aggressive)- perhaps the talons should be touching the very pointy top of the pyramid and not surrounding the top part? 3. Can you make the talons not look so big? (see design #67 by dapc79)
Once the above three items are done. Can you show me another variation in the colors of the writing? all in color silver and the other in the same colors you have for design #78 (silver for SUCCESS and blue for WEALTH MANAGEMENT)
Can you make a couple of changes to your design #60? 1. Similarly to your Design #78, can you please do a black background? 2. I also would like to see the white feathers on the tails 3. Can you make the eagle look like it is placing the top piece on the pyramid (it looks like it is ripping it off and leaving with it) 4. Aling all the writing in Succes & Wealth Management 5. On the pyramid, can you show me a couple of different blues? one the same blue as your design #70. the other, perhaps a similar blue to the background in design #69 by GoodGuy Design.
Thanks for your adjustments to Design #60. After seeing the changes, I like your Design #78 the best and prefer we only work on this design as it is my favorite of all the designs you've submitted.
Can you please work on the changes requested earlier today for Design #78? If it helps, it's the message I sent 8 hrs ago and the message started as: "Hi,
I love your design #78. Could you make some changes?"....