Unfortunately, I had to withdraw my original submission because it was a bit too close to an existing logo. I have attempted a similar concept with my second submission #13.
I will continue to work on more designs for you. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Glad to make changes for you! I wasn't sure if this is what you requested, but I have separated the name and tagline by putting more space between them. If you meant something else, please let me know and I'll get right on it! ;)