Office of the DA, South Island, NZDLogo Design Contest

Hi, I wasn't sure if you still needed to retain a bit of the SUBWAY identity or not, so feedback is very welcome ... best wishes,

husk

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Hi,

I intend to insert / lay the SUBWAY logo over / in the finished graphic anyway - but have to be careful about copyright issues, etc. Did't think you guys would be allowed to make any use of the official logo.

I like the badge effect and the white lines in the background - could that maybe be outline of sandwiches instead?

I'm thinking I have given you guys too much text to work with, and the artwork is too busy / too much to fit in. How about dropping the "saving the world" text.

Can you wrap the white and yellow arrows around the button (to echo the logo which I would place where you have SUBWAY in #1)?

Colour combination is good - nice and clean reflecting our food & values.

Let's see what you come up with.

Thanks.

Hi, I've left space in this one for you to insert the subway. Thanks for the feedback - keep it coming!

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