I've been staring at these new designs for a while trying to figure out what it is that isn't working and i think it's that the girls is too muted. she sort of blends too much with the background. I like her. she's cute, but the other girl was sharper. maybe because her dress color was different? can she be seated on the word "your" in entry #18? she looks out of place...and maybe her hands should not be so even...maybe if she was walking toward the right, but turned her head to look toward me, and one leg kicked up... LOL. sorry...i'm getting creative here.I really like your design, and I'm just trying to fine tune it as much as I can...trying to figure out how to make it just right.
Thanks for all the suggestions. I'm working on a new version now. Only one problem, I can have her sitting on a word because another designer used this position before me and it would be copying. I hope you understand. I can different positions though, maybe have her sit on a chair. Thanks.
hey there...can you match her shoe color with her dress color and perhaps put on a bigger necklace? perhaps a couple strands of pearls? something classic..nothing too big but bigger than what she has now.I can hardly see it. and the piece of jewelry in her hand needs to be bigger, can't really tell what it is.
oh great. i'm glad you put them back up. I like how you changed the color of the shoes. Also, I like the turquoise necklace, jewelry you had in the newer entries, I just didn't like the change in font and her features. i like this girl better. I like how the word "your" is emphasized in #14 and I would prefer to see her other hand in #34. Sooo...in #30, can we change her shoe color, edit the jewelry, emphasize the "your" and perhaps have her left hand at the level of the word "your"?
also, i think i prefer the brighter pink dress in the newer designs as well. #43, i like how it's brighter...even the green is pretty. and maybe i like how there isn't the bubby background also. but i prefer the color of the wording to be the same except for maybe "your" and can we try for something without the globe?
I started working on the revisions but I just realised I can't submit any more entries because I'm not a top 5 designer (because I withdrew my entries) and only top 5 ranked designers can submit in this phase.
Hey I finished al the revisions but in order to upload them I need to have at least one of the old designs ranked. As soon as you rank one of them I can upload the new ones. I hope you understand. Thanks.
Hi - if you are selected as the winner - can you please provide pricing for the following as well - in addition to the contest winnings.
a) Letterhead featuring chosen logo in both saved for the web form and high res. b) Favicon c) High resolution artwork for printing business cards, calling cards, etc.
Please be specific - as I'd like this information before selecting a winner.