#5 the lettering is okay but to cartoonish. #6 is Okay. the market is male racing so we want cool and aggressive. Maybe something you would see for a heavy metal band or on an MMA fight shirt. We need to have this product look cool and different from any other cleaning product.
I checked your profile for ideas and I would like something similar to the Naw-T-Boy.com face. To me that expression is cool and aggressive. Try a few different characters with that look. Eyes down teeth showing. Also the product in the bottle is bright neon green so the label will need to compliment that as it will be the back ground. Maybe red, yellow, and black and them the product will be the green back ground. I'm not great with colors.
#25 We like the font for both words. Can you make the soap a little smaller and the stupid a little thicker. The stupid needs to read as clearly as the soap. Can we see a few more options on facial expression for the bubble guy? And maybe make the bubble guy blue or purple (the green back ground is okay for now but remember the product is that color). Nice work and thank you for your time.
Thanks, I'll do some more work on this when I get back to my design computer later on tonight. FYI, my thought process on the color of the bubble guy was to keep him the same color as the product so it looked like the bubbles were from the soap. I can easily show color options for comparison though. As far as the facial expression, do you want to see more or less aggressive, or more of a comical expression?
There will end up being two different bottle types one clear and one white, so the bubble guy will need his own color or will need to have color. The face expression is good but maybe without a nose and more detail on his teeth. Maybe a different mouth shape as well or maybe a few of the smaller bubbles having a similar intense face on them. Thank you again for your time.
Sorry for all the ideas but we do like the font on #25 but stupid needs to be thicker and easier to read and soap could be smaller.
How about a figure similar to the Michelin Man but made out of bubbles that looks like a pissed off body builder. A muscle guy that is really muscular like the golds gym guy but out of bubbles.
We also thought of a bubble face holding two stupid soap squirt bottles like they are guns wearing a cowboy hat. Tombstone and Outlaw Josie Wails tough.
#42 is looking cool. We still think the stupid part does not stand out enough. Maybe a brighter color yellow as well as bigger letters for sure. We like the fonts for both words. Bigger Stupid smaller soap.
We do like what we see but how hard and how much time would it take to develop a Terminator/Bubble/Muscle guy. A Michelin Man Terminator Bubble Muscle Man. That would be awesome.
I just noticed #45!!!! He is starting to look like a muscle man out of bubble. Like the Michelin Man mixed with the first Terminator at the end of the movie when he was Chrome. How hard would it be to do that iridescent look? I know that will take more colors.