The flower is great! Can you do coloring that is not so feminine looking? We are going for more of a modern look. I think changing the font would also help. All in all, its getting much closer!
Getting closer. This style is a top so far. #26 and #46 are nice. Can you make the flower more reddish? On #26, the word Studio and the word Lotus look too disproportionate. I know they're supposed to be, but a little more tweaking would be good. On #46, I like the spacing of this, could you make the font a little less cursive like (or bubbly like). Font called Philosopher is good. Can you try this flower red also. Thx.
I like the font on #65. The flower seems a bit overpowering and too feminine. Perhaps take out the dots, change the color and make the flower a little less prominent.