On Entry 6, I like the concept however, studio is too big diluting the logo of the dms. i therefore have ranked 7 higher, but not sure I like the offset letters. i will think about it.
just an idea, on entry 16, can you go vertical with the word 'studio having it read from bottom to top. this will leave the camera shape intact but emphasize the dms? Also it should make the logo look less cluttered i think.
i like your concept on 25 and 26. i just dont like the font you are using for the dms. it is too juvenile looking and i want the logo to give more of a fashion/model/agency image. can you give me some ideas??