We really like this one. The lines bring it together more. Could you try it with larger font size the line spread out more? It feels a bit long like this so trying to think of other ways to orient it.
Thank you, I think image on top or on left of text both look really good, because logo should be flexible in different layout, color, and placement, the important think is flexible to apply in any media.
This looks good. Can you make the white lines I have marked up match the thickness of the white line around the hex? It might be too much but wanted to try it.
We like only having the first letter of each word capitalized. Can you try a few different fonts that might work well just to compare a few options?
We like the symbol here a lot. Can you try this one not in all caps for the font. So keep the S and B capitalized but make the other letters lower case? See the font on a couple of the other logos that as something similar.
This looks good. Can you put the darker grey circle back in the middle of the symbol like you had in #51. Make "bite" all grey except for the top bar of the E and make it black. Also connect the bottom two bars of the E (opposed to being separate like you have it here). The top bar can remain separate.
Sorry, made a prior comment on a different logo before seeing this one. So for the white lines, make them cross in the middle of the symbol as opposed to on the sides. It's as if there is a big + in the middle of the symbol but you can only see it in the black, outer part of it.
Thanks for feedback, update proposal :
- #44 and #45 : reduce the circle, put nuts closer to the end, with 2 version of blue color
- #46 and #47 : remove the nuts and make circle small, 2 version of blue color
- #48 same with previous but with different font
- #49 and #50 stud and nuts replace "i letter"
- #51 : change blur to black, replace image on left, and add 4 lines cross the circle.
Let me know your thoughts.
Will you put the graphic to the left of the words. Put four white lines through the circle part of the graphic like a + sign that can only be seen in the outer part of graphic. Can you us black in place of blue? Also try the words with two different fonts, one bolder than the other.
I like the stud graphic and general logo structure. Can you put the nuts closer to the end of the stud and try it with no nuts? Try making the circle slightly smaller around the stud and tilt the stud at less of an angle. Also can you use a darker blue, similar to the dark blues in the Apex logo example. Maybe try a slightly different font, the word Stud seems a bit too simple.
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For comparation I submit version with all letters capital #131, let me know your thoughts.
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How about this update? #129 and #130
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I have 2 version for suggestion maybe you can compare with the current #127 and #128.
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Below RGB color number
Outer circle : 0 0 0
hexagon : 153 153 153
inner circle : 102 102 102
Stud : 0 0 0
Bite : 128 128 128
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Thanks for feedback, exact the same with entry #113 font and replace logo on left.
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Thank you, I think image on top or on left of text both look really good, because logo should be flexible in different layout, color, and placement, the important think is flexible to apply in any media.
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Jefry
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Update logo on top
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This update #112, #111, #110 with little bit thick of white lines with new font style.
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This update #109 and #108 focus on white lines same size as bolt outline and another little more thick then previous.
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We like only having the first letter of each word capitalized. Can you try a few different fonts that might work well just to compare a few options?
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Update proposal if you want keep the black line in top of E #106.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal, I make 2 version #104 and #105, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal Stud in black
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Update proposal #91
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #86, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback and mark up, sorry for late response last comment received on 23.48PM in my country.
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Update proposal #64 and #65, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal :
- #44 and #45 : reduce the circle, put nuts closer to the end, with 2 version of blue color
- #46 and #47 : remove the nuts and make circle small, 2 version of blue color
- #48 same with previous but with different font
- #49 and #50 stud and nuts replace "i letter"
- #51 : change blur to black, replace image on left, and add 4 lines cross the circle.
Let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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Jefry