I think the body needs to be just a bit thinner now too because the "feathers" aren't as big. What would it look like to have a nice gradient of purple and pink throughout the word strut... and bring the gradient back to the feathers too that you had in the first draft.
I like the sizing better but I'd like to keep more of the shading and gradient feel you had in the last version. I'm quite surprised that I like this because it's very clearly a peacock-- and in my brief I said I didn't want an obvious peacock... but you've done a nice job here. :) THANK YOU. We'll see where we end up.
I do like it...it's a very interesting use of the peacock. I'm wondering if the biggest feather "red and orange" is too big? Can that be made a bit less overpowering?
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I hope you like it :)
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I will make feather more small than now. And i will try to make a bit less overpowering.
Please wait.
Thank you for comment :)
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