Love this one! Could you try making the font have a healthcare feel to it (like a healthcare font)? And what if the "Health" part of the slogan stood out a little more than the other two words?
I absolutely love how you've made the S and C part of the person and that you used blue in the Strength and green in the Clinic! A few quick notes that would make this stand out EVEN MORE;
- Could you make the S either navy/royal/dark blue and the C a shamrock/leaf/medical green instead?
- Try using a different font as would be used in a medical practice.
- Could you try to emphasize the "Clinic" portion by making it bigger or stand out more (like a thinner Strength and a bolded Clinic)?
- You could even try playing around with the different greens and blues used in some of the other designs.
- If you could add the slogan to the bottom of the name, and if somehow to emphasize the "health" aspect of it either with a different color or bolded or what have you.
This is great, and hopefully with this feedback you'll make it even greater than it already is!
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do you like the tagline to be italic? or straight ?
the reason I use italic because PROACTIVE should represent movement/active. not static.
that's why my logo is strong/bold but also dynamic with movement.
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- Could you make the S either navy/royal/dark blue and the C a shamrock/leaf/medical green instead?
- Try using a different font as would be used in a medical practice.
- Could you try to emphasize the "Clinic" portion by making it bigger or stand out more (like a thinner Strength and a bolded Clinic)?
- You could even try playing around with the different greens and blues used in some of the other designs.
- If you could add the slogan to the bottom of the name, and if somehow to emphasize the "health" aspect of it either with a different color or bolded or what have you.
This is great, and hopefully with this feedback you'll make it even greater than it already is!
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