Thank you for the new submissions Ysonmez! I really like how the character seems in motion. - Rather than the shades of maroon, can her top and shoes be shades on the same red from the text? - I prefer the word strategic to be the stronger word in red. - Can we try her pony tail going the other direction and add a bow where the red is in her hair? - Can we also try her mouth closed?
Thank you so much. Can you show me close up of just the character? Also can we try her sandals in black? On #62, can the letters in EXPERIENCE be closer together and a little space between the last E and pants? Also can there be a little more space between her pants and the B in BREAKTHROUGHS? Can she have a little more hair in her ponytail?
This is looking fantastic. - Can I see a close up of her face? - Can we try making the black belt just a tad thicker? - On her pant leg at bottom, closest to the "S" in Samurai, can you add a little darker definition so it shows up slightly more? - Can we try all black sandals?
- The pant leg looks great - thank you. - Also, I love her hair now! - I prefer the red sandals - let's go back to red tops with black bottoms please. - On the black belt, please make it all black - no design please. - On her face, there is a white circle below her right eye. Can you remove that please? - It seems there is also a spot in her hair - between her right eye and her bow (where the bangs begin) - can you fill that in black please? - Can you add eyelashes?
The last change I need is that to be proper, I just noticed, the knuckles on right right hand (closest to the tsuba or sword guard) should be pointing up and her left knuckles should be pointing down. In other words, her hand placement is correct - just please switch the knuckles.
Thank you - her hands look good but the color changed on her hands and neck. Can you change the color on her hands and neck and make them the same color as you had them in #90?
My sword master just reminded me: "the left hand always covers the bottom of the handle."
Therefore, can you kindly move the left hand down to cover the tip of the sword? (The way the hands are facing are correct and the right hand is now correct - just need to move the left hand to cover the tip of the sword and this way there will be sword handle showing between the two hands.)
If you can make that very last change and then we are done!
I appreciate all your hard work and LOVE your design.
Ysonmez, I love the shading in #105 but what I had asked above is if you can you kindly move the left hand down to cover the tip of the sword handle? So in other words, her right hand is perfect - just move her left hand down so that you see her right hand and then you see part of the sword handle and the you see her left hand which covers the end of the sword handle. Thank you so much!
For the final design, please move her left hand away from her right hand just a bit more and make it so there is no part of the end of the black sword handle showing past her left hand - so you can not see the black tip at all. I like her thumb smaller like you had it in #104. Then there will be more of the sword handle visible between her two hands.
I hope I am explaining this clearly but I'll try again just in case: What you will see in the final design is her right hand exactly as you have it, a little more of the black sword handle and then her left hand with a smaller thumb - with no tip of sword handle visible at all :)
- In #111, it seems we lost the shading in the left sleeve as it was in #110. Can you put that back?
- Can you move her left hand farther away from her right hand so you can see more of the black sword handle? Ideally you will see double the amount of black sword handle that you can see in #110. You can move the right hand up against the tsuba (sword guard) so that you can't see any black and then move the left hand slightly farther away and that should do it.
Once we have those changes we should be done.
Thank you for your patience on the last details - they are very important to me.
As I mentioned in my last comment, it seems we lost the shading in the left sleeve under the left hand. See how much more defined it was in #110 and #104? Can you put that back in like it was in #110 and #104? If you can, we are DONE!!!
Ysonmez, I don't see the difference between #116 and #113? What I had asked in my last comment is to bring back the shading that is in her sleeves of her shirt just like number #110 and #104. See how there is darker color which defines her sleeves in #110 and #104? If you can bring that back, we will be all set.
Please let me know if this is clear or you need me to explain it another way :)