Re: #38, Thx yudi! for a fresh take, I love the added sparkle in the corners. Can I see how it looks by removing the swirl and lowering the frame around the rooftop? this will take away some bulk..
Possible to see Straight Up in upper & lower case?
another idea: Keep the swirl and use a softer (less edgy, more feminine) font for the words in the red banner. I'm loving the banner idea! Good job ~
#34, Dear yudi: May I see what this looks like without the chimneys? There are no chimneys here in Hawaii :) I do appreciate the depth of the subtle shading with the red.
Let's tighten up the lettering so it fits square under the roof and not extending out, please and Thank You!