Thank You for your efforts! We are getting close. I'd like to note that while the concept is clever, #6, #15 & #16 suffer from overwhelm due to THE ALL CAPS.
Can we see please what #15 looks like with letters changed to lower case?
Hello.. Thank's a lot for your continue feedback.. Really appreciated.. update for your request #39 if you need other suggestion please let me know..:) Thank you
Re #44: Nice take on the sparkle! It is a little improvement on your 1st submission, which I do like a lot! Let's keep the lettering solid color, while the grayed shading adds interest it doesn't add to the idea...
The banner is GREAT! it gives the feeling of a prizewinner. With that thought, can the banner edges be softened up, more like a ribbon?
Let's stick with #1 but add the element of the sparkle & the banner, keeping all colors solid including the background. Thank you~
Thanks for envisioning my ribbon idea, this works! and it flows nicely. I prefer #47 for the plain white background. 1. Can you please give me solid black on the lettering? That would look nice & sharp.
With your SPARKLE, you gave me an idea: 2. What do you think about adding a little black wand just above it? With a bigger (brighter) sparkle that could give your original idea just a touch of magic. Staging a property does transform it so that little bit added is Genius :)
Right on, That's the idea!, re #49. a couple things:
1) the wand can be smaller & then angled from upwards going down, to not get confused with the letters.
2) Let's remove the arrow pointing up in between the U and the p. It looks great with #1 when everything is more basic, I think it's distracting in #49
3) if we go solid on the Red, the sparkle will show up more,
4) I like the sparkle better than the stars, what do you think, You're the expert ~ Kindly humor me to see if my suggestions make any difference, but just know what you've turned in is: Brilliant!
Hello again.. update #50 and #51 what do you think..? #51 with solid red.. I change the star to sparkle.. I'm pleasure for other revision when you need.. here 2.46 am ..:) indonesian time.. I'll be back for other revision..at morning.. it's a rest time..:) Thank you
Thank you for your diligence Amanterkendali and expeditious replies; You should get some sleep, now! You don't really need to do revisions: I won't ask you to make any more changes as I'm confident if your design wins, you & I will be able to work together to tweak it. I've invited some of my friends to help me vote so you rest for now, & we'll be talking again soon. Your fan ~ Jackie
Hello Jackie.. How are you today...? hopeness everithing fine..and have a great day :) just a small update #72 change the staging font I'm feel this more readable..:) Thank you
Next morning: Let's delete the wand, it's not working ...
Let's work with #65 (because I like the darker, truer red color; the others feel dark orange) 1) No wand, but keep the stars 2) delete the grey shadow around the windows. and then
3) please show me those adaptations without the stars, similar to #1 entry. Thank you, I'll be looking for two submissions from you . . . Mahalo ~
That looks great! One more (I think) request: May I see that in favorite font?
Papyrus Bold, & then possibly narrowed to fit (you can see it in my #2 ranked), It may not work, amenterkendali, but I do like the playful elegance of that style...