#10 Like the fact that the little bird looks like a cartoon bubble because it reminds of what we see in a comic strip and it expresses the idea of story. Now having two of them is too much in my opinion, maybe can you keep just one of them or merge the two. The name is better but I'm not in love either. Do you think you can use the logo somewhere in the name?
#11 It's alright but maybe a little bit too simple.