Can you make the graphic ~10% smaller and space "Capital Partners" across the bottom, such that it is aligned with StoneHollow? Also, please use the same lighter color from your graphic for "Capital Partners". Thanks.
...testing one more version with subtext streched beneath the whole STONEHOLLOW part,...it might work, but proportionaly, versions #634 and #632 seem better balanced. Hope this helps to compare both layouts!
This font option looks quite balanced and elegant,...I've made subtext nicely readable and centraly positioned, but not interfering with focus on STONEHOLLOW, and removed vertical separator, to test this option as well,...negative space version is presented on #635!
Let me know if I can be of further assistance! Thank you!
P.S. I've also tested one more option on entry #630 (with its negative space version on #631), making the subtext slightly narrower in relation to the title, so it doesn't take away the focus from the main, STONEHOLLOW segment, which should be more emphasized, since it is the base of the brand.
Thank you for all the constructive feedback. I've made few font options with modified colors and proportional tweaks on the text part,...check out entries #626, #627, #628, #629.
Let me know if I can be of further assistance! Thank you!
Could you use a slightly darker color for the teal-like color you used? Also, can you justify/space "Capital Partners" so that it lines up with "Stonehollow"? Lastly, can you try a different font or two, please? Thanks.
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Let me know if I can be of further assistance! Thank you!
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Hope this little analysis helps.
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Thank you for all the constructive feedback. I've made few font options with modified colors and proportional tweaks on the text part,...check out entries #626, #627, #628, #629.
Let me know if I can be of further assistance! Thank you!
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