#15 is getting real close, if you change the Capre Diem background to all black and make the banner larger, but still behind the phoenix tail. Make the "tails" of the S and V smaller and stretch out the STEVERA in the wings more but keep the STEVERA completely in the phoenix. Thanks!
The changes are great but could you try a couple of things...I like the banner idea from #47 for the carpe diem and can you remove the highlights in black and white from the phoenix to see what the solid red would look like? Thanks!