Thanks, Peg. I would like to see Steel in all caps, and in a strong, serif font. Moms not italicized. All font in black- and then use the flower as a place for color. Still not crazy about the stem on the flower.
I like the arrangement, but still something isn't right. I'd like to see a more modern, sleeker font used for Steel and Moms. And a more elegant font used for magnolia. Not crazy about the branch. I know you were trying to make the flower element fill that space so it lines up with the content on the right. Maybe delete the line separating it and allow the flower to nestle in towards the bottom, party tucked in btwn "Mag" and "a special place"- think the actual flower is my favorite part of this design. Still feel like the leaves aren't right. Thanks for your work on this!
I would be interested in seeing less emphasis on Moms and maybe a little more on the Steel Magnolia. Or maybe just Magnolia. Also would like to see the leaves be less pointy
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