Stay N PlayLogo Design Contest

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This is definitely the one. I don't have any other feed back, this one pretty much captures what we are going for. thank you!

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YES. that looks fantastic. Can we change the color of the green "A" to the same color of the green "P"? the "A" still looks faded along with the "T". If you're going for a yellow color for the "T" lets use the same yellow that you used in the second "A". lastly, we'd like just a little bit of flair to the logo. Such as; little balloons, stars, confetti, etc. to accent the logo lettering. Thank you!

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I think you went backwards with this one. a lot less color variety in this one than the previous and you still have the olive green in there, this time with the whole word. I like the color green you used for "Stay" its got volume and its on the bright side, however the whole word is one solid color. we need to mix it up. I do think I see some spacing difference in there from my comment on the first draft and it works.

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Hello,

I really like the font style here that's almost exactly what I'm looking for. Some of the font colors seem to be faded though. What I mean by that is I can see where you have the natural base color of green in the second "A" and then I look at the "P" and it's an olive color. I'm looking for those bright base colors. I know there's only so many colors you can use but if you have to brighten or dull the colors I'm definitely leaning towards the latter. Also, we will definitely need some space between the first "Y" and the "P" in play. That's always the downside to bubble letters is how jumbled they make words look and I think spacing in those areas would kind of alleviate that.

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