Can we try brighter colors on this one. I think it will look more bold with bursting colors. we like everything on this one but the dimness of the colors.
This one looks fantastic. A nice array of bright colors with the right amount of flair to enhance the lettering. I like the choices of the clip art objects too, it will definitely capture the eye of our target audience. Very nice and thank you!
this is a great piece. I like the colors and the font style, the little balls accent it very well. I would suggest though that we cut out the children and replace it with other images/objects like balloons or stars or something child neutral. I know that may sound counterintuitive since it is an kids play place but with cancel culture in full swing we want to stay away from anything that would potentially come back to haunt us later. the only other thing I have is we definitely want to have the letters aligned horizontally. thank you! looks great!
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Thank you so much for your feedback and ranking. Here is the requested revision. #43
I will also create a new design with another concept I thought you might like and upload it later today.
Warmly, Andra
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this is a great piece. I like the colors and the font style, the little balls accent it very well. I would suggest though that we cut out the children and replace it with other images/objects like balloons or stars or something child neutral. I know that may sound counterintuitive since it is an kids play place but with cancel culture in full swing we want to stay away from anything that would potentially come back to haunt us later. the only other thing I have is we definitely want to have the letters aligned horizontally. thank you! looks great!