Stay N PlayLogo Design Contest

this one works great! good color variety and sequence. letter outline and effects are fantastic, and I think this one looks way better with the new clip art. Thank you!

rainbow instead of the castle.
Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Kind regards,
Bob.

I think your last submission, #40, was the best one still. this one went backwards on color variety. Let's try something else on the castle though. I like it but it gives it a bouncy house kind of feel and our facility is not purely bounce house oriented.

new coloraturas options.
Let me know if you would like to see nay adjustments.
Kind regards,
Bob.

this one is what I was looking for. looks really well now. Thank You!

Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Thank you!

yes actually the smaller castle does look better. lets use that with the other critique where I mentioned color variety.

Thank you!

This is much better. Only thing I have is we need to have a little more variety for font color. you can see where it consistently presents in red, blue, green, orange and then again for the second word; red, blue, green, orange. we still have purple, pink, yellow, etc. and they can draw the eye a little better, especially when the target audience is ages 1-12.

Thank you!

...another option with smaller castle and more playful letters...

Thank you for the feedback.
Here is option with the font adjustments.
Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Thank you.
Kind regards,
Bob.

hello,

I like this one, its got that kid feel to it and it pops really well. I'm looking for more color variety though. Maybe use some more of the base colors for different letters in the words. I'm not sure if its on my end but the green looks like an olive green color and not your regular green base color. also, the two tone coloring for the letters isn't the feel we are going for, one solid color is fine. but definitely keep the white marks at the top of the letters that give it that balloon effect.

Hello.
Here is my first proposal.
Let me know if you have any suggestions.
Kind regards,
Bob.