Stage BacklineLogo Design Contest

Entry #1: hi! Please make the large "S" look less like a "5" and loose the two stars in the middle. Thanks for your entries!

Many thanks, for feedback, its really helped me.
and I already update my logo at #4 and #5.
Do you mean like this?
Just let me know :)

Best Regards,
makinson

#5: could you reduce the number of strings behind to 5 (to match the number on a note sheet), and also play a little with the typography for the S and the B?

#10: has to much going on inside SB I'm afraid.

I like your playfullness with #8, #9 and #11, but I need to let them sink in a bit first :-)

Thanks for your superfast responses!

#12: hmmmm, try removing the lines and enhance "SB" to the same size as "STAGE BACKLINE" so that "STAGE BACKLINE" becomes an informative under text, and that "SB" can be used alone if we have to little space on the flight cases (for the musical equipment).

#3: can you emphazise a bit on STAGE? Could be made to appear as if "STAGE" was the logo part, and "BACKLINE" was the informative undertext. Made as a pure text logo. Play a little bit with different positions and angles on the two words?

I already update my logo at #41, #42 and #43.
Do you mean like this?
Just let me know :)

Best Regards,
makinson

Good stuff!

#42: could you try a different typeface in "BACKLINE" and a little bit more heavy/rocked up typeface on "STAGE"?

Thanks! :-)

#12: we really like this, but we would like to see it with some more "edge" to it. Rock it up a little harder if you could. Thanks :-)