#9 - I think the idea behind this concept is great, but find the letters difficult to read. Could you rework this so the green swoosh is behind the letters, yet still portrays the continuous motion/movement of it? Or maybe it's behind the first S, then in front of the rest of the letters? An alternate exploration would be appreciated.
#65 looks great!! Could I please see a revision. Instead of using black for the tagline, could you please typeset that in the same green color. Thanks.